a man of wealth and taste ([info]sticktothestory) wrote,
@ 2008-03-23 23:45:00
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Entry tags:aziraphale, crowley, my fic: good omens

Drabble: The Unforgivable Sin
The Unforgivable Sin

“Don’t even think about it,” says Crowley, voice promising worlds of pain to come.

Aziraphale throws the snowball anyway.

Chalk it up to physics, to surprise at having a direct command ignored—perhaps even to some
sort of unspeakable plan—but the fact remains that there follows a rush of air, an undignified
noise from an unidentified direction, and the satisfying crunch of an irresistible force making
cold contact with an unmoved object in a black Versace overcoat.

A moment of deafening silence. Then, quietly, dangerously, a low hissing sound.

“You know,” spits Crowley, “how I feel about wet spots.”




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[info]chaya
2008-03-23 11:02 pm UTC (link)
I LOVE IT SO MUCH

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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[info]sticktothestory
2008-03-24 12:46 am UTC (link)
Thanks for letting me know!

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[info]makeanewworld
2008-03-23 11:05 pm UTC (link)
Ahaha, this is great. :D

Nice and appropriate for a snowy day, too!

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[info]sticktothestory
2008-03-24 12:47 am UTC (link)
Thank you! Is it snowing over there, on Easter?

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[info]makeanewworld
2008-03-24 12:52 am UTC (link)
Well it was this morning - it's mostly melted now. I s'pose if you can't have a white Christmas, a white Easter's the next best thing. :D

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[info]mod5nar
2008-03-23 11:20 pm UTC (link)
Hahahahaha, fantastic.

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[info]sticktothestory
2008-03-24 12:47 am UTC (link)
Thanks, I'm glad you liked!

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[info]finmagik
2008-03-23 11:36 pm UTC (link)
Awww this is great.

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[info]sticktothestory
2008-03-24 12:47 am UTC (link)
Thank you, I'm glad you thought so.

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[info]iamnotnormal
2008-03-24 01:56 am UTC (link)
Ok this drabble is cute, but I also love your icon...

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[info]sticktothestory
2008-03-24 02:00 am UTC (link)
Thanks on both accounts.

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[info]eeyore9990
2008-03-24 02:13 am UTC (link)
Ahahaha! That's hilarious!

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[info]sticktothestory
2008-03-24 02:14 am UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]sirius_luva
2008-03-24 07:11 am UTC (link)
Ahaha, this was hilarious! I love it!

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[info]sticktothestory
2008-03-24 01:17 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, I'm happy to hear that!

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[info]nevermore_1106
2008-03-24 02:53 pm UTC (link)
It's snowing over here... (Norway) and I reeaally wish it wasn't, but this made it better. So lovely! ^^ (And for some reason, I found Crowley very sexy in this. Hm.)

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[info]sticktothestory
2008-03-24 03:33 pm UTC (link)
Glad to have been of service!

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[info]vulgarweed
2008-03-25 02:21 am UTC (link)
Heee, wonderful!


It's nice to see Aziraphale as the prankster for a change. :)

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[info]sticktothestory
2008-03-25 02:24 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! Always fun to subvert a fandom cliché.

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[info]m_erechyn
2008-03-29 03:29 am UTC (link)
It was snowing (almost blizzarding, if that's a word) today, which was very odd. And then I went home and read this, and it was almost ineffable. :D

The last line is just perfect. So many little things summed up in a sentence.

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[info]sticktothestory
2008-03-29 01:37 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, I'm very happy you liked it!

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[info]argyleheir
2008-04-29 10:11 pm UTC (link)
Don't know how I missed this the first time around. Wet spots! So brilliant.

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[info]sticktothestory
2008-05-01 07:13 am UTC (link)
Thanks, I'm so happy you liked it!

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[info]foxxfire5
2008-09-09 04:48 pm UTC (link)
Heh, I love this. It's wonderful how the first line has the reader going, 'OMG what's happening??' and then it goes to "Aziraphale throws the snowball anyway." xD

Gotta love when expectations are turned on their head. ^_^

Lovely drabble. Now I wonder what Crowley's going to do to get revenge. 0_o;;

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[info]sticktothestory
2008-09-11 12:49 pm UTC (link)
Wow, thanks for taking the time to comment! It's such a treat to get reactions to older posts. I'm very happy you liked this.

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